Concerns and Questions about the Draft NTP Monograph on the Systematic Review of Fluoride Exposure and Neurodevelopmental and Cognitive Health Effects

As a scientist who highly values the fair, relevant and accurate evaluation and presentation of scientific study conclusions – and who trusts the process of formulating, reviewing and adjusting (when required) any well-established scientific consensus – I have some serious concerns and questions about the DRAFT NTP MONOGRAPH ON THE SYSTEMATIC REVIEW OF FLUORIDE EXPOSURE AND NEURODEVELOPMENTAL AND COGNITIVE HEALTH EFFECTS that I would appreciate having answered as part of the review process.   

I understand from information on page 3 that in 2015 this NTP “review was initiated in response to a nomination from the Fluoride Action Network.”, fluoridealert.org was searched for publications, and the foreign language studies were translated by the Fluoride Action Network.  Fluoride Action Network hardly constitutes an unbiased scientific institution.

Community water fluoridation (CWF) is an important, well established public health measure for reducing the risk of dental decay and related health problems in communities.  CWF programs depend not only on the scientific consensus of relevant experts but on the perception of residents who are not scientists or health care professionals but who contribute to the democratic process – either as voters or governmental officials who ultimately determine the fate of public health measures.  

It is critical that this review take into account the potential for dismantling CWF programs worldwide if the current wording, “that fluoride is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard to humans” is retained – particularly when the review as presented does not seem to confirm that significant, verifiable conative harm occurs at levels below 1.5 ppm.  Fluoridation opponents who have been pushing to acquire legitimate scientific support for decades will have just the phrase they need to scare more people into voting to discontinue CWF.  They were disappointed with the 2016 NTP fluoride review and very upset by conclusions of the 2018 NTP animal study they pushed for.  A primary conclusion “that fluoride is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard to humans” will create significant, unwarranted chaos – particularly in the case of the qualifications critical to exposure levels in fluoridated water which will be completely ignored.

A recent Bloomburg article, Public Trust in Tap Water May Hinge on Fluoride Link to Child IQ, stated, “National Academies committee to review finding that high fluoride exposure could decrease children’s IQ.  Final assessment could influence local governments’ decisions to fluoridate water supplies
A federal agency’s preliminary finding that high concentrations of fluoride may decrease children’s IQ will, if finalized, be hard to explain to the public, scientists said Nov. 6. 
The National Toxicology Program’s (NTP) draft report concludes that “fluoride is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard to humans,” Seun Ajiboye, director of science policy and government affairs at the American Association for Dental Research, told a National Academies panel.  The public and media will focus on that “sensational” sentence, Ajiboye said.  Few people will read the report’s other finding: It’s unclear whether the mineral would harm children drinking typical concentrations of fluoride added to drinking water to help tooth decay, she said.
https://news.bloombergenvironment.com/environment-and-energy/public-trust-in-tap-water-may-hinge-on-fluoride-link-to-child-iq

Unless the NTP review Evaluation Team is able to appraise and reject all the criticisms that I and others present concerning this draft monograph and is able toconclude without a reasonable doubt that ingesting optimally fluoridated water (<1.5 ppm or so) “is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard to humans“, I would strongly suggest changing the conclusion to: “fluoride at levels of exposure significantly above that found in optimally fluoridated drinking water is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard to humans”.  The Evaluation Team can define the term "significantly above" in a different sentence.

There is an overabundance of fake news available these days, and reputable organizations must do everything possible to avoid inadvertently contributing to it.

I have seven categories of concerns and questions that will be presented below:

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Concern 1:  As a scientist, I am concerned that the NTP, SYSTEMATIC REVIEW OF FLUORIDE EXPOSURE AND NEURODEVELOPMENTAL AND COGNITIVE HEALTH EFFECTS as titled and presented in draft form is playing into the hands of anti-fluoridation activists.  Fluoridation Action Network is already using the conclusion of the draft review to claim a respected scientific organization agrees with their opinions on the risks of community water fluoridation.  (Image 1, below)
http://fluoridealert.org/content/bulletin_10-26-19/

Question 1a:  Is the body of scientific evidence used to formulate the draft NTP conclusion “that fluoride is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard to humans” accurately, specifically and statistically relevant to exposure at levels found in optimally fluoridated water with a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard in fluoridated communities?  Or are the results that might possibly show any potential small association with cognitive neurodevelopmental issues only potentially demonstrated at higher exposure levels than found in optimally fluoridated communities as noted in the review?  If so, exposure at the lower levels (<1.5 ppm) can hardly be labeled a “presumed hazard”.

Question 1b:  since this review will be primarily used to formulate and assess community water fluoridation practices, why was the scope not restricted to study conclusions that were relevant to exposure at levels found in optimally fluoridated communities?  Explain why the review was not titled SYSTEMATIC REVIEW OF COMMUNITY WATER FLUORIDATION RELATED TO POSSIBLE NEURODEVELOPMENTAL AND COGNITIVE HEALTH EFFECTS???  If that were the focus of the review, the conclusions which would have been an accurate description of findings would be:  “There is insufficient evidence to conclude that exposure to fluoride ions at levels more than twice those in optimally fluoridated water can be presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard to humans.  The studies that have examined a possible correlation between exposure to fluoride ions below 0.5 ppm have reported conclusions that have varied widely from no association, to weak positive and negative associations in all children, to conflicting differences between boys and girls.

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Concern 2:  As a scientist, it is my assessment that the NTP Fluoride Exposure Draft Monograph contains significant, unwarranted, unscientific conclusions.  Specifically the wording (P 2 & 59), “NTP concludes that fluoride is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard to humans. This conclusion is based on a consistent pattern of findings in human studies across several different populations showing that higher fluoride exposure is associated with decreased IQ or other cognitive impairments in children. However, the consistency is based primarily on higher levels of fluoride exposure (i.e., >1.5 ppm in drinking water).” is both false and irresponsible with absolutely no relevant context until the third sentence – which makes it prime fodder for anti-science activists – see Concern 3.

In fact, the phrase “fluoride is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard” was used ten times in the review.  The word “presumed” has a completely different meaning and a significantly greater negative bias than the conclusions actually stated in most studies referenced which only concluded there may be a possible “association” or “correlation” between exposure to fluoride ions and a given neurological issue.

The NTP conclusion seems to be an example of an irresponsible, blanket claim of harm:

(a)   without noting how weak the reported “associations” or “correlations” were.  The strongest association, to my knowledge, was about 5% with huge scatter.  That means 95% of any “association/correlation” would have other causes – and, of course, correlation does not mean causation (or a presumed hazard);

(b)   that completely ignores the significant limitations of the studies reviewed (addressed in other questions);

(c)    without any context of the actual exposure levels;

(d)   without highlighting the wide variety of outcomes reported in other studies (from no association to some high or low associations to different associations based on sex or age);

(e)   without apparent consideration of the fact the two studies (Bashash, et al, and Green, et al.) referenced (P 49 & 52) as “two well-designed and well-conducted Canadian and Mexican prospective cohort studies of children”  used data from the ELEMENT and MIREC studies which were not designed to test the fluoride and IQ hypothesis.

Concern 2a & b, weak association & study limitations:  Since many of the studies reviewed in the NTP Monograph that reported a weak negative correlation/association between low fluoride levels and neurodevelopmental and cognitive health effects were published in fairly obscure journals, they avoided intense scientific scrutiny and were not widely referenced except by fluoridation opponents. 

The publication of the Green, et al. study in a fairly respected journal, however, combined with a very unusual introduction by the editor and significant resulting publicity changed the dynamic.  There has been a major, unprecedented response to the Green, et al. study from many members of the scientific and health communities around the world who have presented serious study limitations, and there has been a request by 30 experts for study data for independent analysis.
http://www.cyber-nook.com/water/FluoridationInformation-green.html

Concern 2c, context:  The NTP conclusion of “presumed hazard” is as meaningless as an equally true, but misleading, statement: “Based on a review of available evidence, I conclude that H2O is presumed to be a significant physical hazard to humans.  Hyperhydration causes symptoms which can lead to injury and death in children and adults”.  The evidence of potential harm from exposure to water at levels four to ten times higher than recommended is far greater than the evidence that exposure to fluoride ions in drinking water at 4 – 5 times greater than the recommended level of 0.7 ppm.
https://www.medicalnewstoday.com/articles/318619.php#4
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC6682940/
Complications from acute (>3 L/h) or chronic (5–10+ L/day) water intakes at rest are uncommon but may result in acute water intoxication or chronic urinary tract abnormalities such as urinary bladder distention, ureter dilation, and hydronephrosis.”  Note, the chronic over-exposure level is just 3 to 5 times higher than recommended exposure levels to ingested water.  The same conclusions can be presented regarding exposure to medicines, vitamins, salt, etc. – they can all be presumed to be hazardous when exposure levels are omitted.

Concern 2d, different outcomes:  Another fact misrepresented in the NTP conclusions is that there is a “consistent pattern of findings” (P 1, 2 52, 53, 59).  In fact, the pattern is far from consistent in the studies reviewed which actually demonstrates that there is no relevant pattern that links exposure to optimally fluoridated water with lowered IQ or other neurological issues.  In order to make that claim, all of the significant limitations of the studies that conclude they found a negative association with fluoride and any cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard would need to be dismissed.

=> Some studies that had conclusions completely contrary to the NTP conclusion, “that fluoride is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard to humans.
~> August 2019, Fluorinated water consumption in pregnancy and neuropsychological development of children at 14 months and 4 years of age: (Santa-Marina, et al., Environmental Epidemiology: October 2019)
Prenatal exposure at the levels found in fluorinated drinking water may exert a beneficial effect on the development at 4 years of age. At low doses, fluoride could present a dose-response pattern with a beneficial effect.”  This study was not part of the NTP review.

~> From the 2019 NTP Draft Review, P 54: “Surprisingly, three of the studies (Xu et al. 1994, Qin et al. 2008, Aravind et al. 2016) found that the lowest IQ scores were in areas with the lowest and the highest fluoride concentrations” 

~> 2014 dissertation, Fluoride exposure during pregnancy and its effects on childhood neurobehavior: a study among mother-child pairs from Mexico City, Mexico, by Deena B. Thomas used data from the Mexican ELEMENT study which also provided data for the Bashash, et al. 2017 and 2018 IQ and ADHD studies.  Four of the five members of her Doctoral Committee and Thomas were coauthors of the published Bashash, et al. studies.  Thomas’ dissertation concluded: “Overall, this investigation found no evidence of a detectable adverse outcome on offspring neurobehavioral development associated with maternal fluoride exposure during pregnancy.” P 75
Overall, this investigation found a significant positive impact on neurobehavioral development due to ingestion of fluoride in male children but no association was detected in female children. Fluoride measured in urine was significantly associated with total WASI score in male children ages 6 to 15 years old” P 77

~> 2018 study, "An Evaluation of Neurotoxicity Following Fluoride Exposure from Gestational Through Adult Ages in Long-Evans Hooded Rats", lead by the Neurotoxicology Group of the NTP concluded, “The findings of this well-controlled animal study directly address previous concerns regarding potential biological plausibility of fluoride as a neurotoxin. The findings provide valuable information and assurance that low-level fluoride exposures from water and diet that are equivalent to the levels allowed in the US does not result in clinically adverse neurobehavioral function or pathological effects in various organs.
Reviewers at Fluoride Science concluded, “The findings of this well-controlled animal study directly address previous concerns regarding potential biological plausibility of fluoride as a neurotoxin. The findings provide valuable information and assurance that low-level fluoride exposures from water and diet that are equivalent to the levels allowed in the US does not result in clinically adverse neurobehavioral function or pathological effects in various organs.”

~> October 2019, Fluorinated water consumption in pregnancy and neuropsychological development of children at 14 months and 4 years of age: (L, Santa-Marina, et al., Environmental Epidemiology: October 2019)  “Conclusions: Prenatal exposure at the levels found in fluorinated drinking water may exert a beneficial effect on the development at 4 years of age. At low doses, fluoride could present a dose-response pattern with a beneficial effect.”

~> January 2015, Community Water Fluoridation and Intelligence: Prospective Study in New Zealand, (Broadbent, et al., Am J Public Health. 2015) “Conclusions. These findings do not support the assertion that fluoride in the context of CWF programs is neurotoxic. Associations between very high fluoride exposure and low IQ reported in previous studies may have been affected by confounding, particularly by urban or rural status.

~> June 2016, The Effects of Fluoride in the Drinking Water (2016 paper, Aggeborn & Öhman) “We use a rich Swedish register dataset for the cohorts born 1985-1992, together with drinking water fluoride data. To estimate the effect we exploit intra-municipality variation of fluoride, stemming from an exogenous variation in the bedrock. First, we investigate and confirm the long-established positive relationship between fluoride and dental health. Second, we find precisely estimated zero effects on cognitive ability, non-cognitive ability and education. We do not find any evidence that fluoride levels below 1.5 mg/l have negative effects. Third, we find evidence that fluoride improves labor market outcome later in life, which confirms that good dental health is a positive factor on the labor market.

Concern 2e, data not designed for fluoride study:  A research team that does not collect their own specific study data from a population based on a specific study design must depend on data collected by others.  Eventually, data is extracted from another study specifically to fit a study proposal.  There are a number of possible situations in which the extracted data might not have been collected in an appropriate manner for a different study, or it might not contain all of the variables necessary to establish a legitimate association between variables, never mind the presumption of a presumed hazard.

Questions relevant to Concerns 2a & b:  
~>  Has the NTP review Evaluation Team carefully considered all of the criticisms presented against the Green, et al. and Bashash, et al. study designs, data selection, data evaluation and conclusions – not to mention the other reviewed studies? 
http://www.cyber-nook.com/water/FluoridationInformation-green.html
If so, are any of the criticisms legitimate?  If the NTP has found any criticisms unfounded, provide the reasons. 
If any of the criticisms are legitimate, is it even remotely accurate to present the studies as, “two well-designed and well-conducted Canadian and Mexican prospective cohort studies of children where repeated maternal urinary fluoride levels were assessed during pregnancy…”? (p. 52)

~>  Why didn’t the NTP review publish its conclusions as they were stated in the reviewed papers? 
How and why did the NTP review Evaluation Team make the transition from the actual conclusions of the widely varied and conflicting studies which, at most, only stated there was a possible association or correlation to the published conclusion “fluoride is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard” (used 10 times within the monograph) which implies an established cause and effect relationship???

~>  Is it appropriate to finalize and publish the “SYSTEMATIC REVIEW OF FLUORIDE EXPOSURE AND NEURODEVELOPMENTAL AND COGNITIVE HEALTH EFFECTS” with the primary conclusion “fluoride is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard” before the many exposed problems, limitations and concerns of Green, et al. study (and many similar problems, limitations and concerns of other reviewed studies) have been adequately addressed by other experts?

An example for consideration of a more accurate current monograph conclusion would be: “NTP concludes that a number of studies have evaluated the correlation between exposure to fluoride ions and cognitive neurodevelopmental in humans.  Those studies have reported many different possible associations or correlations between cognitive neurodevelopmental and exposure to fluoride ions, all of which are small and most occur at exposure levels >1.5 ppm in drinking water – twice the recommended level in optimally fluoridated water.  The studies have reported a variety of different, inconsistent and often conflicting findings.  Some studies reported no effect of fluoride exposure levels at levels equivalent to those in optimally fluoridated water and higher. Some studies reported a small decrease in cognitive neurodevelopmental at higher fluoride exposure levels for all children.  Some studies reported a small increase in cognitive neurodevelopmental at higher fluoride exposure levels for all children. Some studies reported a small decrease in cognitive neurodevelopment for boys but not girls, and some for girls but not boys at higher exposure levels. Some studies have reported a decrease in cognitive neurodevelopmental at both the lowest and at higher fluoride exposure levels.

Question 2c:  If all substance ingestion or activities that were beneficial at optimal levels but caused (or were even associated with or correlated with) potential harm of some sort at levels 3 to 5 times higher than “normal levels” were categorized as a “presumed hazard”, what would be the consequence for most human actions?  For a government entity to selectively and repeatedly frame an established, beneficial public health measure that has over 70 years of supporting evidence in a manner that deliberately makes it appear to be dangerous is shocking.
http://www.cyber-nook.com/water/FluoridationInformation-Reviews.html

Question 2d:  Why didn’t the NTP review Evaluation Team highlight the wide variety of different study outcomes in their conclusions?  Even if some studies were evaluated as better than others, the small effects, wide scatter in available graphs, and conflicting conclusions should be a warning to not presume there are any conclusions sufficient to change the current scientific consensus. (Image 2 below)

Question 2e:  Did the NTP review Evaluation Team consider the possible, significant limitations of using ELEMENT and MIREC data instead of data actually collected for investigations specifically designed to study the effect of fluoride at levels found in optimally fluoridated water?

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Concern 3:  Fluoride Action Network is already using the NTP draft review in its propaganda.
http://fluoridealert.org/content/bulletin_10-26-19/ - “On Oct 22, the National Toxicology Program (NTP) published a draft review of fluoride’s neurotoxicity concluding: ‘…Fluoride is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard to humans.” & “FAN disagrees with NTP’s conclusion that studies “with [fluoride] exposures in ranges typically found in the water distribution systems in the United States (i.e., approximately 0.03 to 1.5 ppm) …are inconsistent and therefore unclear.’“ 

Question 3:  Why is the NTP statement (P 2 & 59), ”When focusing on findings from studies with exposures in ranges typically found in the United States (i.e., approximately 0.03 to 1.5 ppm in drinking water, NHANES (Jain 2017)) that can be evaluated for dose response, effects on cognitive neurodevelopment are inconsistent, and therefore unclear” not the primary conclusion of the review?  As I will discuss in other questions/concerns, even that equivocal conclusions has some serious problems.

The conclusion that fluoride is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard in children is based on the consistency of the data; however, most lower risk-of-bias studies observed effects with drinking water concentrations above 1.5 mg/L. As noted above, describing the effects at 1.5 mg/L or below, which is more relevant to the exposures observed in the U.S. population, including from community water fluoridation, is more difficult”. (P 57) 

As noted in Question 2d, the information NTP used for the primary conclusion “fluoride is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard” does not actually seem to be consistent with studies of fluoride exposure levels near that experienced in fluoridated communities worldwide.

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Concern 4:  Individuals associated with the Green, et al. study have made very public claims (referenced below) about their opinion that ingestion of optimally fluoridated water is as harmful as lead exposure.  Those claims seem to have been staged, and they appear to be supported by the current NTP conclusion that “fluoride is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard” – which was repeated ten times throughout the monograph under review.  As with all claims made by fluoridation opponents to date (and the NTP conclusion), they are presented without relevant context and are not a complete or accurate representation of the actual evidence.  Specifically:

a)   Unlike fluorine, lead has no known beneficial function in human health – only harmful effects have been identified.  In contrast, over 70 years of evidence supports the scientific consensus that optimal exposure to fluoride ions (in water, toothpaste, etc.) reduces the risk of dental decay and related health problems.

b)   There is no safe exposure level for lead while there is no consistent, quality evidence (as noted in the review) that drinking optimally fluoridated water causes harm – and a great deal of quality evidence of beneficial effects.

c)   There is no way that ingestion of optimally fluoridated water could be “very similar to the effect size that’s seen with childhood exposure to lead.”  If that were true, it would be expected that someone besides fluoridation opponents would have noticed it in the huge body of relevant evidence. 

d)   Fluoridation opponents have made a blanket statement about an alleged similarity between lead exposure and fluoride exposure with no context of exposure levels.  Harm from low levels of lead exposure is not equivalent to harm from high exposure levels to fluoride – any more than a claim that taking vitamin supplements causes hypervitaminosis.

e)   It is very easy to cause confusion and fear among members of the public who don’t have relevant science/health training or experience by promoting blanket, out of context statements like fluoride exposure is “actually very similar to the effect size that’s seen with childhood exposure to lead” or “fluoride is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard

f)   With lead exposure there is no discussion about risks vs. benefits at any exposure level because there are no known benefits, only risks of harm.  In contrast, with fluoridation, even if an association was demonstrated of low fluoride exposure and a small drop in IQ (or other neurological issue) there would still need to be a discussion of any potential risks against the well-established benefit.  Simply making out-of-context statements like fluoride exposure is “actually very similar to the effect size that’s seen with childhood exposure to lead” or “fluoride is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard” is not supportable by scientific principles.

Specific Public Claims:
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According to Green (~27-30 minutes), the strength of correlation of one of the important regression lines in the Figure 3 graphs (apparently for the Male/MUFC correlation) “explains 5% of the variance” –– which would mean a r2 value of 0.05 –– and was defended as statistically important within the context of various factors that might possibly influence IQ.  She stated it “is quite a big number. It is actually the same number we see in the lead IQ studies…
https://www.facebook.com/MedPageToday/videos/2396767130414029/
~> In an editorial “Is Fluoride Potentially Neurotoxic?” that ran with Till’s study, David Bellinger, a professor of neurology at Harvard Medical School and Boston Children’s Hospital, wrote that ‘the hypothesis that fluoride is a neurodevelopmental toxicant must now be given serious consideration.” He told NPR: ‘It’s actually very similar to the effect size that’s seen with childhood exposure to lead.
https://www.buzzfeednews.com/article/nidhisubbaraman/fluoride-water-iq-kids-debate
https://www.npr.org/sections/health-shots/2019/08/19/752376080/can-maternal-fluoride-consumption-during-pregnancy-lower-childrens-intelligence
~> In a podcast with the JAMA Pediatrics Editor and Chief Dimitri Christakis and Frederick Rivara the following claim was made (4:00 minutes in) “Mothers who lived in fluoridated areas had higher fluoride concentration in their urine and a higher fluoride intake during their pregnancy than mothers who lived in non-fluoridated areas, and there seemed to be an effect on their kids’ IQ.  Now this effect was only seen in boys, where a 1 mg/L increase in the maternal urinary fluoride concentration was associated with a 5-point lower score on the boys’ IQ.  An effect size which is sizable.  Which is sizable, on a par with lead.  And in girls, they found a non-significant increase in their IQ.  The effect size is really quite large…
https://edhub.ama-assn.org/jn-learning/audio-player/17802991

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Two news stories reported, “Fluoride poses a greater risk than NTP's draft report suggests, Chris Neurath, research director for the Fluoride Action Network, told the committee,
NTP's report consistently paid less attention to studies that found low concentrations of fluoride could be harmful, he said.
The scientific evidence showing fluoride can harm children's developing brains is as strong or stronger than was the data that emerged in the 1990s—and faced fierce criticism—showing low levels of lead were neurotoxic
, Neurath said.”
https://patch.com/new-york/levittown-ny/long-islanders-wisely-rejected-fluoridation
https://news.bloombergenvironment.com/environment-and-energy/public-trust-in-tap-water-may-hinge-on-fluoride-link-to-child-iq

Question 4a:  Do you agree with my concerns above about claims of an alleged similarity between lead exposure and harm and that of exposure to optimally fluoridated water? If not, why not, and what specific evidence can be provided to prove that claim?

Question 4b:  Is it appropriate to finalize and publish the “SYSTEMATIC REVIEW OF FLUORIDE EXPOSURE AND NEURODEVELOPMENTAL AND COGNITIVE HEALTH EFFECTS” current NTP conclusion that “fluoride is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard“ before all criticisms of the current NTP review (and the studies they are based on)  knowing the anti-fluoridation activists will immediately further distort any conclusions and pronounce that science has validated their opinions that fluoride is poison and community water fluoridation should be banned???

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Concern 5:   There are many extremely important, potential factors that can significantly contribute to a child’s IQ.  Some are listed below, and most of them apparently were not collected, analyzed and included in the Green, et al.  study (or in the other studies reviewed either.

Some of these important, mostly ignored variables include:

a)      Parental IQ:IQ and education for both parents were statistically correlated to child IQ. However, paternal IQ and education were not significant after accounting for maternal IQ effects.” (Meador, et al., Epilepsy Behav. 2011) “IQ correlations – father-child, 0.51; mother-child, 0.55. So intelligence clearly has a powerful genetic component.”(Intelligence and IQ, Dr. C. George Boeree)

b)      Diet and nutrition of mothers during pregnancy & Diet and nutrition of children after birth:After adjusting for maternal education, socioeconomic status, the Home Observation for Measurement of the Environment (HOME) score, and total caloric intake, the good prenatal and childhood nutrition indices predicted more favorable neurodevelopment, while both poor nutrition indices predicted poorer neurodevelopment. These associations were stronger in prenatal than childhood models.” (Malin, et al., Nutrients 2018)
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC6115750/

c)      Birth weight and early-life weight:Within this cohort of typically developing children, early-life weight status was inversely associated with children's perceptual reasoning and working memory scores and possibly with full-scale intelligent quotient scores.” (Li, et al., Obesity, 2018)

d)      Length of time breast-feeding:Breastfeeding duration of 1 month or shorter compared with longer periods was associated with approximately three points lower IQ… In conclusion, in this large sample with high quality assessment of child IQ, we found support of a beneficial association for breast feeding with child IQ at 5 years of age, while adjusting for maternal IQ and parental education, which only few previous studies have been able to do.” (Strøm, et al., BMJ Open 2019)

e)      Amount of time parents spent with child: Using a large longitudinal British dataset, I show that paternal involvement in childhood has positive associations with offspring IQ at age 11, and offspring social mobility by age 42, though not with numbers of grandchildren. For IQ, there is an interaction between father's socioeconomic status socioeconomic status (SES) and his level of involvement, with high-SES fathers making more difference to the child's IQ by their investment than low-SES fathers do.” (Evolution and Human Behaviour, 2008)

f)       Maternal education, household income, parents’ skin color, duration of breastfeeding, head circumference and number of siblings were the most powerful predictors of low IQ at age six. Of a broad set of potential social and biological predictors explored those essentially social were the most impactful ones, which could mean that a high proportion of these children may require intervention.”  "Another major finding of this study is the effect of growth, nutrition, and breastfeeding during the first year of life on cognitive ability. Children who were breastfed for a longer period were less likely to have low IQ than those who were not breastfed." "Other predictors of low IQ were smoking during pregnancy and maternal perception of the child’s health." (Camargo-Figuera, et al., BMC Pediatr.)

g)      Amount of time each child spent in front of TV or playing electronic games:In multivariate models, being a third-born or more child and watching television ≥1 h/day at 24 months were negatively associated with all IQ scores…” (Plancoulaine, et al., Sleep Med. 2017)

h)      Many other factors were ignored that influence intelligence and cognitive development in infants and young children: that influence intelligence and cognitive development in infants and young children, for example: Amount of time each child spent outside playing; Amount of time each child spent socializing with others; any environmental stress, genetics, etc.
The IQ of an individual is multifactorial and is determined by a multitude of factors. Nature and nuture work together in determining human intelligence. Even though the genetic susceptibility plays a crucial role on the IQ of the individual, various modifiable environmental factors like education, premature birth, nutrition, pollution, drug and alcohol abuse, mental illnesses, and diseases can have an influence on an individual’s IQ. These modifiable factors can reinforce or weaken genetic susceptibility.” (Arun Oommen, Journal of Neurology & Stroke, 2014)

If the Green, et al. study had actually been designed and implemented to find a legitimate, potential association between prenatal exposure to low levels of fluoride, and IQ, then data on most of these (and other) extremely critical factors which have known negative effects on IQ and cognitive development should have been collected and analyzed in addition to the several factors mentioned in the report.

Question 5a:   Without adjusting for a number of significant factors that contribute to IQ how can the NTP review Evaluation Team possibly conclude that “fluoride is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard“?  As discussed in other questions this is a particularly disturbing conclusion when made in the absence of exposure levels and other significant limitations.

Without considering many possible factors that can have an important impact on a child's IQ, why would any extremely low (boys-only) potential association of IQ with low levels of exposure to fluoride be of any value?

Question 5b:  What is your assessment of the criticisms of the Green, et al. study to date?  If any of them are legitimate and not addressed and remain unresolved by the NTP review Evaluation Team, is it appropriate to continue describing the assessment as a highly unbiased, reliable study?
http://www.cyber-nook.com/water/FluoridationInformation-green.html
https://openparachute.wordpress.com/2019/09/25/biostatistical-problems-with-the-canadian-fluoride-iq-study/

I did some research and discovered that both average income and average daily temperature have a significant effect on IQ with r2 values of 0.30 and 0.45 respectively. (Image 3 below)  In fact the correlation is about an order of magnitude larger than most fluoride studies.  From this analysis it can be seen that a higher average daily maximum temperature can be “presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard“ while a higher average income confers a significant cognitive neurodevelopmental benefit – of course a higher IQ could confer a higher average income.
https://www.worlddata.info/iq-by-country.php

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Concern 6:  The Risk-of-bias Heatmaps are an interesting feature of the NTP review process – they add some color to what is otherwise a black and white narrative.  I am not a statistician, and at first glance they seem to be reasonable assessments. 

However, as noted in my previous Concern 2 and Question 2d, even from the perspective of a scientist who is not specifically trained or experienced in the complexities of statistical analysis, I am able to understand that when scatter graphs are presented that look like they were produced by a shotgun blast (or a drunken monkey playing darts), any presumed association would be extremely low, subject to “adjustment” by any outliers and completely destroyed by other un-considered or ignored significant confounding factors.  I have also read “How to Lie With Statistics, and I have heard over the years of various ways to manipulate a statistical analysis so that statistically significant results are found.  I had no reason to delve into that realm until about five years ago when I began examining claims made by fluoridation opponents and other groups that are driven to undermine various public health measures that are based on the relevant scientific consensus.  Since then the frenetic dedication and creativity of those groups has astounded me – not in a good way.

Concern about the Green, et al. study motivated an unprecedented response from thirty academics and professional experts from health and dental institutions in the US, Canada, UK, Ireland, and Australia to formally complain to the US National Institute of Environmental Health Science (NEHS) about the study.
https://openparachute.wordpress.com/2019/10/24/experts-complain-to-funding-body-about-quality-of-fluoride-iq-research/
The letter lists a number of problems with the Canadian study. These include:

1.      Focusing on a subgroup analysis amid “noisy data”:

2.      Modeling and variable anomalies:

3.      Lacking data on relevant factors:

4.      Omitting crucial findings:

5.      Using invalid measures to determine individual exposures:

6.      Defining the final study group:

7.      Assessing the impact of fluoride exposure:

8.      Reporting anomalies:

9.      Internal inconsistency of outcomes:

10.  Overlooking research that conflicts with the authors’ conclusions:

https://www.asdwa.org/wp-content/uploads/2019/10/NIEHSLetter10-23-19.pdf

The CADTH appraisal of the Green, et al. study identified numerous, serious limitations; “In summary, multiple methodological weaknesses that potentially affect the internal validity of the study results limit the generalizability of the findings to all pregnant persons in Canada.” and concluded, “Given multiple aforementioned limitations (e.g., non-homogeneous distribution of data, potential errors and biases in the estimation of maternal fluoride exposure and in IQ measurement, uncontrolled potential important confounding factors), the findings of this [Green, et al.] study should be interpreted carefully.
https://mattjacob.s3-us-west-2.amazonaws.com/cwf/CADTH+Evaluation+of+Green+Study+(2019).pdf

I have carefully examined all of the criticisms of the Green, et al. study submitted by a number of statisticians based on claims that various forms of statistical manipulation might account for the published results of a presumed association between fluoride exposure and IQ.  It became obvious that the same level of statistical evaluation should be employed to assess the validity of study conclusions from the other studies used by the NTP review Evaluation Team to substantiate their claim that fluoride is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard – particularly if the claims are made in the context of ingesting optimally fluoridated water. 
http://www.cyber-nook.com/water/FluoridationInformation-green.html

I did not see any category in the Risk-of-bias Heatmaps that evaluated the potential statistical issues in the 10 concerns listed above or in other criticisms like satisfying Hill’s Criteria of Causality, limitations suggested in the CADTH appraisal, possible P Hacking, etc.
https://www.acsh.org/news/2019/08/19/no-fluoride-doesnt-lower-iq-it-fails-satisfy-hills-criteria-causality-14229
https://epidemiological.net/2019/09/23/the-hijacking-of-fluorine-18-998-part-three/
https://www.sciencemediacentre.org/expert-reaction-to-study-looking-at-maternal-exposure-to-fluoride-and-iq-in-children/

Question 6a:  Why are there apparently no Risk-of-bias Heatmap categories for the numerous potential problems identified with the statistical analysis process in the Green, et al. study – and by association with the other reviewed studies?

Question 6b:  Will relevant new “statistical appropriateness/validity” categories be added to the final NTP SYSTEMATIC REVIEW OF FLUORIDE EXPOSURE AND NEURODEVELOPMENTAL AND COGNITIVE HEALTH EFFECTS? If no, why not?  If yes, what specific potential manipulatory statistical tactics would be considered?

Question 6c:  Did the NTP review Evaluation Team assess the Green, et al. study (and the others on the Risk-of-bias Heatmaps) against any of the statistical critiques presented above?
~> If so, which critiques were considered, which studies were evaluated and what were the NTP review Evaluation Team’s specific findings?
~> if not, why were the potentially serious study limitations not addressed?

Question 6d:  Will the NTP review Evaluation Team publically address all of the specific and extremely serious concerns of statisticians and other relevant experts that have been presented against the Green, et al. study – and by association, with all of the other studies referenced in the NTP in the final Monograph?

Question 6d:   In the Review Monograph (P 8) the Evaluation Team states, “Unpublished data were eligible for inclusion provided the owner of the data was willing to have the data made public and peer reviewed. Does this statement apply to published studies like Green, et al. where 30 experts have identified potentially significant issues and are requesting the data be made public and open to additional peer review.  Understandably (and thankfully), this is a rare situation, but if inappropriate statistical methods have been utilized – even unintentionally – to arrive at conclusions which are not as published, it is critical to expose them.

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Concern 7:  I understand that Friday, November 15 is the deadline for acceptance of comments on the Fluoride Monograph and that there is a significant volume of concerns, information and questions.

Question 7:  Is it appropriate to close the collection of new data, concerns, criticisms and opinions on Friday, November 15 before all of the relevant issues have been exposed and adequately addressed?

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A final communication sent Friday, November 15, 2019:

Attention: Project RSO Dr. Ellen Mantus, Chair Dr. David Savitz, and the Peer Reviewers of the NTP Draft Monograph on Systematic Review of Fluoride Exposure and Neurodevelopmental and Cognitive Health Effects.

Before the deadline for comments on the NTP Draft Fluoride Monograph expires tonight, I would like to respectfully (but urgently) make a request.  Even if my critiques of the Monograph and the dozens of other excellent assessments/suggestions I have read from scientists and health care professionals with more direct knowledge and experience than myself are not sufficient to substantially change the current draft version of the systematic review of the SYSTEMATIC REVIEW OF FLUORIDE EXPOSURE AND NEURODEVELOPMENTAL AND COGNITIVE HEALTH EFFECTS, please at least consider changing the conclusion that “fluoride is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard to humans. to a statement that more accurately represents the review conclusions as currently presented.

As I noted in my previous communications, the phrase “fluoride is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard to humans” is used ten times in the review, and yet it is completely out of context of any exposure levels.  It is not until several sentences later than qualifications are admitted that, “When focusing on findings from studies with exposures in ranges typically found in the United States (i.e., approximately 0.03 to 1.5 ppm in drinking water, NHANES (Jain 2017)) that can be evaluated for dose response, effects on cognitive neurodevelopment are inconsistent, and therefore unclear. ” And that conclusion does not take into account any review of the studies based on the comments and suggestions – many of which I have read point to significant limitations and potential biases that would remove even the “inconsistent, and therefore unclear” conclusions.

It may be appropriate to make the claim that “mercury is presumed to be a hazard to humans”, or “lead is presumed to be a hazard to humans”, or “disinfection byproducts are presumed to be a hazard to humans”, or to label any element or chemical that is known to have no beneficial health effects – and is known to cause only harm.

However, it is not appropriate to label a substance like fluoride ions that have been presumed to have a beneficial effect on human health at optimal exposure levels (0.7 ppm in drinking water which is meant to be ingested or 1,500 ppm in toothpaste which is not meant to be ingested) with a blanket accusation that “fluoride is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard to humans” – particularly when it appears the review team conclusions don’t support that conclusion at levels below 1.5 ppm.

That would be as irresponsible as making blanket statements like, “coffee and aspirin are presumed to be a neurological hazard to humans” or “water ingestion is presumed to cause death” or “vitamins are presumed to be harmful to health.  All those statements are true if benefits the at lower, optimal levels are ignored and if, like the fluoride presumption, there is no mention of exposure levels

My suggestion is that, if the concerns about the current Draft NTP Monograph are not sufficient to significantly alter the conclusions, at least modify the statement of presumption and modify the 10 instances that claim “fluoride is presumed to be a hazard” in the monograph to “Excessive fluoride exposure (>1.5 ppm) is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard to humans.” 

If that change is not made and fluoride is presumed a hazard in the final document, the fight to keep water fluoridated worldwide will get even harder. 

If that change is made, and a fair context of the conclusions is presented, there will be some ammunition to mitigate the constant onslaught of individuals driven to remove fluoride from community water.

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Some examples from today of how the current argument can be influencing public opinion:

Dentists continue to ignore fluoride’s effect on the brain
https://www.scoop.co.nz/stories/GE1911/S00057/dentists-continue-to-ignore-fluorides-effect-on-the-brain.htm

Federal Judge to Decide if Fluoride-in-Water Case Goes to Trial
The EPA says the health groups haven’t made the case that flouride in drinking water poses an unreasonable risk.

But the health advocates point to a 2017 federal study that found increased levels of fetal fluoride exposure linked to lower childhood IQ. And a Canadian study reported in August that fluoride exposure during pregnancy was associated with lower IQ scores in children aged 3 to 4 years.
A September 2019 draft report by the National Toxicology Program, which examined the Canadian study and others, said that human studies show higher fluoride exposure is associated with decreased IQ or other cognitive impairments in children. [actually the conclusion was ‘fluoride is presumed to be a cognitive neurodevelopmental hazard’]  However, it added that studies with exposures in the range typically found in U.S. tap water showed effects on cognitive neurodevelopment were inconsistent, and therefore unclear.

https://news.bloombergenvironment.com/environment-and-energy/federal-judge-to-decide-if-fluoride-in-water-case-goes-to-trial

Respectfully, Randy Johnson, MS biology

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Image 1:
FAN use of NTP draft conclusion
http://fluoridealert.org/content/bulletin_10-26-19/

Image 2:
High Scatter = Noisy Data = Low Correlation = Meaningless Conclusions

Image 3:
Other factors that can be statistically shown to be correlated with IQ

https://www.worlddata.info/iq-by-country.php